Promotion Case Review
Your case argued, not just edited. Back in 5 business days.
$247 $250 off · founding price, first 10 only
The standard rate is $497, starting once the first 10 founding reviews are done. I'll ask for an honest testimonial afterward, fully optional and never a condition of delivery.
The Kit gets you a structured packet. This is a second pair of eyes on the actual one you wrote, and a hand rewriting the parts that matter most: I read it against the same framework What a Promotion Packet Should Say lays out, and send back specific written feedback, not a generic checklist.
Don't have a draft yet? The Kit is included free with every review - buy, get the templates immediately, then email your draft whenever it's ready. The 5-day clock starts when I receive it, not when you pay. Change your mind before then and I'll refund what you paid minus $49 for the Kit, since that part's already yours. Once you send your draft, I get to work right away - and from that point, the charge is final.
What's in the review
- The full 6-point rubric pass - task vs. outcome, evidence, why it mattered, scope, the level bar, and argument structure, the same checklist behind the post
- Your 3 strongest entries, rewritten - not notes on how to fix them, the finished version, in your own material, so you see the pattern applied rather than just described
- The manager's one-pager - your case written as what your manager needs to be able to say in the room when you're not in it. This is the single most-skipped step in most promotion attempts, and the one a template can't do for you
- A level-bar diagnostic against your company's own ladder documentation (send it with your draft) - whether the packet's shape actually matches what your specific next level requires, rather than being a bigger pile of your current level's evidence
- One free second-pass re-review once you've revised, so this isn't a one-shot verdict
- The one thing to fix first - a single priority, not a wall of notes, since you're working against a real deadline
Cycle deadline closer than 5 days out? Add the 48-hour rush turnaround for $150 at checkout.
This is feedback on the document, not a prediction about what a committee decides. If the work isn't there, no review fixes that. What this does is make sure a packet that has the real work in it doesn't lose the case in how it's written.
Not ready for the full review, or just want a gut-check? Gap Scan is a lighter, faster option.